From e8e8bbf36a0f412fe3e10563063cd1f8a1060d1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Grunbaum <joelgrun@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 27 Jul 2021 07:15:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Added Scott's personal email --- letter.tex | 19 +++++++++---------- 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/letter.tex b/letter.tex index b70a06b..a380a9f 100644 --- a/letter.tex +++ b/letter.tex @@ -16,19 +16,18 @@ I think it would be great to be able to work and learn about the challenges faced by a multinational consulting firm. I am a Master's of Electrical Engineering with Business student, finishing in 2022. -I have completed my Bachelor of Science and Diploma of computing in 2020, also from the University of Melbourne. -In these, I have been exposed to a wide range of problems and have been tasked with finding creative solutions within constrains, which I believe should help with a placement at Deloitte. +In 2020, I completed my Bachelor of Science and a Diploma of computing, also from the University of Melbourne. +During these courses, I was exposed to a wide range of problems and have been tasked with finding creative solutions within constraints, which skills I believe would assist me at Deloitte. -In addition to technical skills from university, I am used to working within teams on technical challenges, both at university and in the outside workspace. -Often these challenges have required me to coordinate with my teammates to research new information and work towards a solution to the task at hand. -I have found that a technical background and communication training has enabled me to approach problems from an unconventional position, often providing novel solutions. -Additionally, I have found myself increasingly interested in the decisions made by large organisations, analysing choices and predicting the outcomes. +In addition to technical skills from university, I am used to working within teams on technical challenges, both at university and in the workspace. +Often these challenges have required me to coordinate with teammates to research new information and work towards a solution to the given task. +I have found that a technical background and communication training has enabled me to approach problems from an unconventional perspective, often providing innovative solutions. +Additionally, I have found myself increasingly interested in the decisions making of large organisations, analysing choices and predicting outcomes. -I believe that a position with Deloitte would offer me some fantastic opportunities I would be unable to experience anywhere else. -The size, scale and influence of Deloitte amazes and inspires me, due to its reach and potential for impact on the world. +I believe that a position with Deloitte would offer me opportunities that I would be unable to experience elsewhere. +The size, scale and influence of Deloitte amazes and inspires me, due to its reach, client base and potential for impact. Being one of the ``Big 4'' accounting firms, Deloitte's reach is unparalleled and has the potential to direct the course of global economics. -This provides the firm, and those working within, the ability to direct the world and make a real difference. -It is for this ability that I want to intern with you. +It is with knowledge of this ability, that I take want to take this opportunity to intern with you. I look forward to hearing from you. -- Gitblit v1.9.3