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From: Joel Grunbaum <joelgrun@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 27 Jul 2021 07:15:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Added Scott's personal email

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 \usepackage[scale=0.8]{geometry}
 
 \begin{document}
-\recipient{Hardware Engineer Summer Intern}{IMC Sydney}
+\recipient{Consulting Summer Vacationer Program}{Deloitte Melbourne}
 \date{\today}
 \opening{Dear Sir or Madam,}
 \closing{Yours Sincerely,}
 % \enclosure[Attached]{cirriculum vit\ae{}}
 \makelettertitle{}
 
-I am very excited to apply for the Hardware Engineer Intern at IMC.
-I think it would be great to be able to work and learn about the challenges faced by a multinational trading firm.
+I am very excited to apply for the Consulting Summer Vacationer Program at Deloitte.
+I think it would be great to be able to work and learn about the challenges faced by a multinational consulting firm.
 
 I am a Master's of Electrical Engineering with Business student, finishing in 2022.
-I have completed my Bachelor of Science and Diploma of computing in 2020, also from the University of Melbourne.
-In these, I have been exposed to a wide range of problems and have been tasked with finding creative solutions within constrains, which I believe should help with a placement at IMC.
+In 2020, I completed my Bachelor of Science and a Diploma of computing, also from the University of Melbourne.
+During these courses, I was exposed to a wide range of problems and have been tasked with finding creative solutions within constraints, which skills I believe would assist me at Deloitte.
 
-I have experience programming in C and Java, solving problems at systems and user levels.
-I also have experience in programming FPGAs with Verilog and VHDL.
-I am also very used to working within teams on technical challenges, both at university and in the outside workspace.
-Often these challenges have required me to coordinate with my teammates to research new information and work towards a solution to the task at hand.
-I have found that the technical background and communication training has enabled me to approach problems from an unconventional position, often providing novel solutions.
-Additionally, I have an interest in capital markets, beginning from family discussions and continuing to high school and university education.
+In addition to technical skills from university, I am used to working within teams on technical challenges, both at university and in the workspace.
+Often these challenges have required me to coordinate with teammates to research new information and work towards a solution to the given task.
+I have found that a technical background and communication training has enabled me to approach problems from an unconventional perspective, often providing innovative solutions.
+Additionally, I have found myself increasingly interested in the decisions making of large organisations, analysing choices and predicting outcomes.
 
-I believe that a position with IMC would offer me some fantastic opportunities I would be unable to experience anywhere else.
-I find IMC's interest and work into algorithmic and computational trading to be fascinating.
-The use of technology to process and make sense of vast amounts of trading data in fractions of a second to analyse investments provides insights that have previously been unavailable and IMC's successful use of this technology is inspiring.
-The level of activity provided by technology allows a significant increase in trading frequency, which when paired with good information leads to excellent returns.
-I want to be a part of the evolving front of technological trading and want to do this with you.
+I believe that a position with Deloitte would offer me opportunities that I would be unable to experience elsewhere.
+The size, scale and influence of Deloitte amazes and inspires me, due to its reach, client base and potential for impact.
+Being one of the ``Big 4'' accounting firms, Deloitte's reach is unparalleled and has the potential to direct the course of global economics.
+It is with knowledge of this ability, that I take want to take this opportunity to intern with you.
 
 I look forward to hearing from you.
 

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