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From: Joel Grunbaum <joelgrun@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 27 Jul 2021 07:15:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Added Scott's personal email

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 \begin{document}
-\recipient{Software Development Expressions of Interest}{Optiver, Sydney}
+\recipient{Consulting Summer Vacationer Program}{Deloitte Melbourne}
 \date{\today}
 \opening{Dear Sir or Madam,}
 \closing{Yours Sincerely,}
 % \enclosure[Attached]{cirriculum vit\ae{}}
 \makelettertitle{}
 
-I am very excited to apply for a Software Development internship at Optiver.
-I think it would be great to be able to work and learn about the challenges faced by a multinational trading firm.
+I am very excited to apply for the Consulting Summer Vacationer Program at Deloitte.
+I think it would be great to be able to work and learn about the challenges faced by a multinational consulting firm.
 
-I am finishing my Bachelor of Science in 2020 at the University of Melbourne, majoring in Electrical Systems.
-There, I am also completing a Concurrent Diploma of Computing.
-I intend to continue with my education with a Masters of Engineering in 2021.
-In these, I have been exposed to a wide range of problems which have presented me with the opportunities to develop my technical, interpersonal and communication skills which I hope should help with a placement at Optiver.
+I am a Master's of Electrical Engineering with Business student, finishing in 2022.
+In 2020, I completed my Bachelor of Science and a Diploma of computing, also from the University of Melbourne.
+During these courses, I was exposed to a wide range of problems and have been tasked with finding creative solutions within constraints, which skills I believe would assist me at Deloitte.
 
-I have experience programming in C and Java solving problems at systems and user levels.
-I have also some experience with programming hardware in Verilog and VHDL.
-I have also played with various open server and enterprise level technologies in my own time, particularly virtualisation and containerisation.
-I have found my academic and personal experiences useful in employment, where I develop embedded systems.
-I hope to be able to further my understanding of performance constrained computing through an internship with Optiver.
+In addition to technical skills from university, I am used to working within teams on technical challenges, both at university and in the workspace.
+Often these challenges have required me to coordinate with teammates to research new information and work towards a solution to the given task.
+I have found that a technical background and communication training has enabled me to approach problems from an unconventional perspective, often providing innovative solutions.
+Additionally, I have found myself increasingly interested in the decisions making of large organisations, analysing choices and predicting outcomes.
 
-I believe that a position with Optiver would offer some fantastic opportunities I would be unable to experience anywhere else.
-The constraints faced from algorithmic trading fascinate me, particularly due to the emphasis placed on, and potential gain from, marginal improvements in performance.
+I believe that a position with Deloitte would offer me opportunities that I would be unable to experience elsewhere.
+The size, scale and influence of Deloitte amazes and inspires me, due to its reach, client base and potential for impact.
+Being one of the ``Big 4'' accounting firms, Deloitte's reach is unparalleled and has the potential to direct the course of global economics.
+It is with knowledge of this ability, that I take want to take this opportunity to intern with you.
 
 I look forward to hearing from you.
 

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